First Response.

I have mixed feelings. I finally got my first reader feedback for the entirety of The Will of Night Rain. The final verdict is that it's really good *phew*. The ending didn't disappoint, which was what I was afraid of all along and the only weak spots he pointed out were spots that I knew needed more work anyway. I was able to get better feedback in some areas than others. The biggest issue is a chapter where my heroine makes a story altering decision while in a meditative state. He doesn't like the set up at all, but couldn't really tell me what could have been done better. I'm hoping that more readers will be able to help me out with this chapter because frankly, I'm stuck. I have another reader who should be finished today and can hopefully offer some more incite for that section.